Thursday, September 25, 2014

C4K Summary for September

I was assigned Ana for my first C4K. Ana’s post is about the lifeguard’s perspective of the waves. She talks about the surfers that are in the waves. She also talks about how a child jumps off a pier and how the waves “swallowed him up.” The waves made the boy struggle. Ten seconds would go by without seeing him and he would pop back up again. Finally the wave “spewed” him up.

Below is my comment I left on her post.

Hi Ana! I attend the University of South Alabama in Mobile, Alabama. I love your story about the wave from a lifeguards view. I know that I definitely could not be a lifeguard. I could not possibly keep my eye on everyone. Keep up the good work with your blog!

Twitter: @sydneybreeves
Email: sydneybreeves@gmail.com
My Class Blog: http://edm310.blogspot.com/
My Blog: http://reevessydneyedm310.blogspot.com/

Below is the link to go to Ana's post:
http://pesanav.blogspot.com/2014/09/the-wave-perspective-of-lifeguard.html#comment-form


I was assigned Cameron V for my second C4K.In Cameron V’s blog his topic was elephants. He talks about how elephants will feel sad about losing their monarch and living on the game reserve. He says that the elephants are sad because of actions that happened earlier. He also talked about how if the elephants were to escape what would happen.

Below is the comment I left on the post.

Hi Cameron V! I am a student at the University of South Alabama. Elephants are one of my favorite animals. I love your blog post! You make some awesome points about elephants and game reserves. It’s great how you thought about the many possibilities for the elephants and told some background information on the herd. Keep up the good work!

Twitter: @sydneybreeves
Email: sydneybreeves@gmail.com
My Class Blog: http://edm310.blogspot.com/
My Blog: http://reevessydneyedm310.blogspot.com/

Below is the link to go to this post:
http://kidblog.org/ElkPelicans_2014/79529b24-5307-4d28-b91a-21d180be6ff7/elephant-whisperer-blog-task-5/#comment-159


I was assigned Lauren for my third C4K. In Lauren’s post she tells a story about three friends. Jake is making a pizza and “chunked” it at the wall. Dani comes to Jake and says that they can’t go to the crocodile festival, and then the doorbell rings. Theo walks in and notices the orange spot on the wall where the pizza landed. He thought his friends forgot him. She ends in a cliff hanger so you never know what happens at the end of the story.

Below is the comment I left on the post.

Hi Lauren! I am a student at the University of South Alabama. I am in Dr. Stramge's EDM 310 class. I love your story! You tell it so well. You can see the actions happening. I also love your ending. This was a great post. Keep up the good work!

Twitter: @sydneybreeves
Email: sydneybreeves@gmail.com
URL for class blog: http://edm310.blogspot.com/
URL for my blog: http://reevessydneyedm310.blogspot.com/

Below is he link to go to her blog post:
https://www.google.com/url?q=http%3A%2F%2Fkidblog.org%2FMrsGreerELA2%2F

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